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How I drink Dr. Pepper

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I'm not sure if I'm done yet. But I'm not labeling it as a WIP

Fixed a ton of stuff. Shading, lighting, coloring, and I added a tornado that represents the 23 flavors. Actually, the recipe's not known, but I did get some of the main ingredients, such as the fruits.

Please help by giving constructive criticism

You can see the original here :D

EDIT: Made tornado a LOT shinier (MY EYES) and changed the font. Thanks, :icongypsythecabbit:. I'll add the water and stuff later

EDIT2: Added some more shading and such. Still open to suggestions ;)
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Wow, this is fantastic! The action and sense of motion throughout this is just amazing! :o

I like the lighting especially, how it shines off the character and the Dr. Pepper bottle. The darker edges really helps us to focus on the main subjects :nod:

I'd say you did an amazing job with the shading, too! The pop bottle looks breathtakingly real, and the shading on the character is very good, too.

I think that perhaps the pop can the character is drinking is a little distorted - maybe it's the angle? I'm not sure, something just doesn't look quite right about it. :/

But I love how eye-catching this is - the bright colors and tornado and everything. Amazing work! :clap: